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The Terraria Dialogue
« on: February 26, 2012, 08:47:15 PM »
The pilot of my web-comic mini series. What'd you think?



Please give me feedback on how to make it better, I am already working on the second and should have it out later this week.  8)
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Re: The Terraria Dialogue
« Reply #1 on: February 26, 2012, 08:53:23 PM »
haha, I love the "I'm totally a genius" Caption. nice affects on the word bubbles too. I just sorta feel like the hands of skeletron are a lot more faded than the skull when they're over the mage dude.
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Re: The Terraria Dialogue
« Reply #2 on: February 26, 2012, 09:33:08 PM »
Haha funny.

I like the quality of it.
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Re: The Terraria Dialogue
« Reply #3 on: February 26, 2012, 11:18:33 PM »
It's great, I like it so far. It needs work to help the continuity. Which of many speech bubbles am I reading first?? I know it's fun to break away from the usual panel format but you can do it better.
...Make one about them trying to run through the corruption all fast without dying. XD
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Re: The Terraria Dialogue
« Reply #4 on: February 27, 2012, 03:27:40 PM »
I like it. It's cool how you are the FF characters in real life. It didn't make sense the first time, but the second time I got it. Is the next one about all of us beating it?
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Re: The Terraria Dialogue
« Reply #5 on: February 28, 2012, 02:40:47 PM »
Quote from: Connors on February 26, 2012, 11:18:33 PM
It's great, I like it so far. It needs work to help the continuity. Which of many speech bubbles am I reading first?? I know it's fun to break away from the usual panel format but you can do it better.
...Make one about them trying to run through the corruption all fast without dying. XD

strangely thats the second time someone's mentioned the continuity of it. I guess I can try a better placement of text bubbles with the next one.

Quote from: zoo804 on February 27, 2012, 03:27:40 PM
I like it. It's cool how you are the FF characters in real life. It didn't make sense the first time, but the second time I got it. Is the next one about all of us beating it?
Awesome, the FF thing was hit or miss, because people would either get it, or wouldn't. I guess I can do one with them running through the corruption, but I've got something already half done for the next installment.
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Re: The Terraria Dialogue
« Reply #6 on: February 28, 2012, 07:39:39 PM »
episode two. I tried different boarders around the text, boarders to each cell, and did my best to improve the readability, sorry for the confusion of the last one. I'm used to reading all kinda of manga so was used to crazy alternate design patterns like that. Also the title header is taller, what changes do you like, what changes don't you like?



Lolz when I remember that the mage is supposed to be Gan, and re-read it It is nothing like gan, more like Black Mage from 8btc; sorry gan  ;D
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Re: The Terraria Dialogue
« Reply #7 on: February 29, 2012, 08:31:47 AM »
This has nothing to do with terraria, but funny.
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Re: The Terraria Dialogue
« Reply #8 on: February 29, 2012, 02:43:39 PM »
Quote from: zoo804 on February 29, 2012, 08:31:47 AM
This has nothing to do with terraria, but funny.
It's building up to something hilarious that does involve Terraria, and skelletron

glad to know you enjoying it  ;D
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Re: The Terraria Dialogue
« Reply #9 on: April 13, 2012, 04:14:01 PM »


what'd ya think should I keep going with the series  8)
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Re: The Terraria Dialogue
« Reply #10 on: April 13, 2012, 05:47:05 PM »
I think you should it's funny and coherent and looks pretty good.

I like this recent one. Trying to explain things logically to this guy is a mistake.
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Re: The Terraria Dialogue
« Reply #11 on: April 13, 2012, 06:03:20 PM »
Haha funny.
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Re: The Terraria Dialogue
« Reply #12 on: April 13, 2012, 06:37:13 PM »
thanks  ;D
awesome I'm glad you guys like it, I'll keep on making them.
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« Reply #13 on: April 14, 2012, 09:13:15 PM »
"Yes I know I have bad spelling, it's what makes me such a good programmer!"
Your comics justify this statement.
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Re: The Terraria Dialogue
« Reply #14 on: April 15, 2012, 11:16:25 AM »
oh lawl 'peoplees'  ;D
and I even spell checked this.
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