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Re: My Webcomic: 'Completely Unnecessary'
« Reply #15 on: January 21, 2010, 06:38:50 PM »
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My crtique:

Some of the jokes also require you to read the cast page. And I sometimes feel robbed of the punchline. Its getting there.

Robbed of the punchline? forgive me if I don't know what you mean :p
What can I do to make it better?

EDIT: We're going to do a series of character introduction comics, so you won't have to read the cast page.
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Re: My Webcomic: 'Completely Unnecessary'
« Reply #16 on: January 21, 2010, 07:55:03 PM »
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Robbed of the punchline? forgive me if I don't know what you mean :p
What can I do to make it better?

EDIT: We're going to do a series of character introduction comics, so you won't have to read the cast page.



Like dragon,The first three panels were perfect. The characters expression were the best and the dragon was awesome. The guys says "That dragon was" and then it went downhill. I thought that your character that leaves out important parts of sentences should at least be used a little more cleverly. Then the guy uses a close up and says yea. One of those WTF moments, but I didn't feel as lol as it should.

Here's an old video it reminded me of though:
http://www.albinoblacksheep.com/flash/demented
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Re: My Webcomic: 'Completely Unnecessary'
« Reply #17 on: January 21, 2010, 08:29:25 PM »
We're still working on it, but that feedback helps a lot. Thanks :)
p.s that video is great.
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Re: My Webcomic: 'Completely Unnecessary'
« Reply #18 on: January 21, 2010, 08:30:36 PM »
I got the joke because the web comic was called Completely Unnecessary so I figured the guy must've said that and it would just be a bunch of situations that are completely pointless with people doing unnecessary things.

Edit: The demented cartoon movie! I've seen that at least 3 times! =D
Watch Nameless 6, those are funny!
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Re: My Webcomic: 'Completely Unnecessary'
« Reply #19 on: January 21, 2010, 08:44:29 PM »
How long is this?! Its so funny and unnecessary!
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Re: My Webcomic: 'Completely Unnecessary'
« Reply #20 on: January 21, 2010, 08:58:21 PM »
Is it me, or are the archive numbers completely random, lol nice touch.
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Re: My Webcomic: 'Completely Unnecessary'
« Reply #21 on: January 21, 2010, 10:56:03 PM »
They're random. Nice find. :)
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Re: My Webcomic: 'Completely Unnecessary'
« Reply #22 on: January 23, 2010, 06:33:52 PM »
LOL! That ice cream one was hilarious! ;D
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Re: My Webcomic: 'Completely Unnecessary'
« Reply #23 on: January 23, 2010, 07:44:53 PM »
Haha, thanks silver! We've got plenty more planned, so expect some more along the style of that coming soon. :) Your support is really appreciated. :)
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