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Jinxycat

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My Story
« on: October 16, 2009, 05:52:25 AM »
I'm writing this story to enter into a writing competition, but I can only submit one chapter at a time, cuz of this max words rule in the comp. Still, I'd love anyone to give me some feedback on the chapter. If anybody likes it I'll put up the rest of the chapters.

http://www.mediafire.com/?uhethymnlko

Thanks for any comments you can give. (Including hate mail).
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Re: My Story
« Reply #1 on: October 16, 2009, 11:10:50 AM »
That was great. :) You should post the rest of the story, I'd love to see where she vanishes to in the book maze and what adventures she and the goblin go on.


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P.S. Is this story a partial reflection of your own life?
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Re: My Story
« Reply #2 on: October 16, 2009, 12:09:12 PM »
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P.S. Is this story a partial reflection of your own life?

Nope. It was plucked straight from my imagination, and perhaps the maze was taken from my all time favorite movie Labyrinth. I'm glad u liked it and thanks for the feedback. I'll post more later  :)
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