so I was woking on those little stories in-between the fights.
free-verse are the humans (the narrator changes just about every time, so be on your feet)
the iambic pentameter is Cthulhu. For those who don't know what that is. it's a type of poetry like the way Shakespeare wrote. Every line has 10 syllables,
This is not done yet, and I think I'll add a part in about the first great civilization of man, when we were still like monkeys (described as a darwinian creature), but Cthulhu overthrows them. Tell me any constructive crytacism any part you want in or removed.
By parts I mean time periods OR mini-narratives.
Also I wrote this at midnight, and skimmed for grammatical errors. If I missed any of them, please don't think I'm stupid
EDIT: whoa! I had some extreme factual errors in there. I'm trying to bend the findings of archeologists so that I can mention Laurasiaian mammals in the piece. and at that point in time human evolution wouldn't have been monkeys, but instead Purgatorius, a mouse-sized mammal
http://dinosaurs.about.com/od/mesozoicmammals/p/purgatorius.htm