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I adapted Theseus to be a science fiction short story
« on: October 29, 2013, 06:51:18 PM »
I adapted the myth of Theseus to be a science fiction short story. You can read it here.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pT0FeF0tMl-Ys-3GBiHPahHRlEq1d6kutKqoaiuJMJo/edit?usp=sharing
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Re: I adapted Theseus to be a science fiction short story
« Reply #1 on: October 30, 2013, 12:42:18 AM »
Not bad, not at all. Entertaining, and just the right length.

If I trusted every person who told me they were a time traveller my life would probably be a lot more interesting.
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Re: I adapted Theseus to be a science fiction short story
« Reply #2 on: October 30, 2013, 09:16:08 PM »
So it might.

Yeah, I basically just copied the pace and progression of the original myth, so the length is not really my work. The comedy, however, subtle as it is, certainly is.
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